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Incubus by Rene Angel Lopez

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Character  incubus

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drawing done with ball point pen
Image size
5830x8630px 6.21 MB
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Your attention to detail is admirable. I do have to say that my favorite parts are the hands and feet.

Now for a little critiquing. I notice that your shading in very focused areas is far above average, but something still seems wrong about it. Then it hit me. You have no broad picture shading with the exception of the legs and stomach going straight to black. Now what I mean by this is that throughout the rest of the piece there is a monotone great tone. I think this piece would look amazingly better if you had a gradual change in your smaller shading depending on the area. Like the shoulders. It is identical to the shading of the wrist. Though is is higher and receives a different angle of light.

This is an amazing piece. Don't take what I am saying as meaning I don't like it. I just think that you are one of my favorite artists here when it comes to attention to detail, and I would love to see your pictures thrive. If I can think of something helpful to say I will. Whether you think I am right or not is your own opinion.

Please keep pictures like this coming. I would love to see in to your creative side.